Group Crit 28/01/16

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In our group crit this week I presented my images of skateboarders which I took in Barcelona last week.

Andi wasn't sure if he was overly keen on the two images I had of the guys sat down rather than up and skateboarding. The purpose of these images was to show the lifestyle and I really liked the skaters sat relaxing as well as boarding. It helps to show another side of what they were doing and I had envisioned an image of them sat down next to a photo of one of them boarding. Below is an example of what I had in mind. Although the crop is tighter than the original images and how they would look printed its a simple mock up to illustrate my ideas.

I think the concept works well and the two photographs side by side work better than individually as they begin to tell a narrative.

I chose to include the image of the skater on his phone as it displays more personality and a small glimpse into his life rather than what he does.


Another point Andi raised about my work is that the geometric shapes and lines contained in the images weren't always straight and that fixing that will have a huge impact on them. I plan to fix this and will show adjustments in a follow up post. 

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